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| What do you think of this? | | It's great, it's really the best Moc you've made. | | 50% | [ 2 ] | | It's great, but I've seen better from you. | | 50% | [ 2 ] | | It's not bad. | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | It's not good. | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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E.K.O.
Member
Posts : 158
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Join date : 2011-09-22
Location : Gävle, Sweden
| | Subject: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Thu Nov 03, 2011 11:41 pm | |
|  This is my 3rd version of the Venator, my biggest and best MOC so far, which I made back in May. It took about 6 days to build, and I'm very proud of how it turned out. It's much more sturdy than my last one. And please don't bug me to cover the studs more, I did my best with the amount of tiles I had.  The back with engines.  The side. Sorry if it's a bit holed.  The other side.  The front.  The top.  Close up on the greebles.  More greebles.  The bridge. I love how it turned out.  The turrets.  The republic emblem. It took a while to build.  Another pic of the bridge. And now to my classic joke: can you see the clones in the bridge?!  The greebles on the other side.  And more greebles.  The back with the engines. I don't know why, even though I have placed the engines like they are supposed to, I still think that there's something wrong with them I can't put a finger on.  The stand.  Just an another pic of it. Well, I hope you liked my biggest and best moc. | |
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Medieval Guy
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Posts : 428
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Join date : 2011-09-20
Location : "Where the wind comes sweeping down the plains!"
| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:38 am | |
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Deus Otiosus
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Join date : 2011-09-16
Location : Slovenija
| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Sun Nov 06, 2011 6:28 pm | |
| The engines are a bit too long maybe? Also the greebling could be pushed in a bit more, but that's it.
Very good job overall. | |
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Ehh
Junior Member
Posts : 103
Reputation : 2
Join date : 2011-10-24
Location : Limbo
| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Mon Nov 07, 2011 4:16 am | |
| Really like the greeblees, Nice build! | |
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Wangster
Not Going Anywhere
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Join date : 2011-09-22
Location : This forum
| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Mon Nov 07, 2011 7:02 am | |
| Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better. | |
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Medieval Guy
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Location : "Where the wind comes sweeping down the plains!"
| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Mon Nov 07, 2011 7:11 am | |
| - Wangster wrote:
- Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
Is there any specific part that you think he could've done better on? For your feedback to be constructive, you have to be more specific. | |
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E.K.O.
Member
Posts : 158
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Join date : 2011-09-22
Location : Gävle, Sweden
| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:44 pm | |
| - Wangster wrote:
- Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
What could be improved? | |
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Wangster
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| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Tue Nov 08, 2011 3:34 am | |
| - E.K.Ocreations wrote:
- Wangster wrote:
- Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
What could be improved? Well, I guess that the ship could be a little wider so it will be in proportion. Also, work on the Red double-arc yellow circle logo. I know that you're using standard bricks and not stickers, but try doing it SNOT. That'll look pretty interesting. Overall, pretty sweet!! | |
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Wangster
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| | Subject: Re: MOC: Venator Class Star Destroyer V.3 Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:12 am | |
| - E.K.Ocreations wrote:
- Wangster wrote:
- Looks good, but I think that you could have done better, not that you didn't do a good job. It's just that you could have done a little better.
What could be improved? Well, I guess that the ship could be a little wider so it will be in proportion. Also, work on the Red double-arc yellow circle logo. I know that you're using standard bricks and not stickers, but try doing it SNOT. That'll look pretty interesting. Overall, pretty sweet!! | |
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